Monday, March 30, 2009

School ... > <

Today is the first day of school . After one week holiday , everything has changed so differently and hasty than what I had expected . We changed the classroom and also the class , and now I am trying my best to get with the name sec 4 ‘ Ruby ’ . Before I walked inside the classroom , I gave a despairing groan . I felt the pressure surrounding pressing me , as if a big rock was pressing my heart oppressively that make me suffocating . I had more excruciating days to stay in this class . When the lesson has just started for five minutes , I started to miss the class before which was filled with happiness , laugh and sound of Caroline ( She was the one who always makes the class felt delighted ) . The silence in the room was so palpable it could almost be cut by knife , everyone concentrated on studying and doing their works , and this was what I used to be in my previous school . Everything just needed to back to what it was before and did not think too much , I convinced myself . I just understood that we should cherish the friends and people surround you , so you will not regret when you are losing it . If you just realized things had happened and everything would be too late .

The o level examination was come more and more nearly , and actually everyone was racing with the time . I was afraid that if I stopped one step , the time will chase over me and everything will change . Even though I just started to really concentrate on studying now , but I believed it was still not too late (which is really a little bit too late … hahaha …. ) .

Aza aza Fighting !! 甘巴爹 !!

4 comments:

  1. When Richard comes back, you won't feel that the class is quiet anymore.

    There are other mistakes but this one is the most glaring to me:
    "The o level examination was come more and more nearly"

    You don't use nearly like that! You may say, "The O level examination is coming more and more near." This still actually sounds strange and the more appropriate one would be that "The O level examination is nearing/approaching." You use present tense because the O level exams have not occured yet.
    粗心大意必定考试失宜!

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  2. Hope you can have fun in the new class...
    Yes...And if u want noise, then Richard's the MAN!

    Corrections:
    and hasty than what I had expected
    AND HASTILY THAN WHAT I HAD EXPECTED

    oppressively that make me suffocating
    OPPRESSIVELY THAT WAS SUFFOCATING ME

    When the lesson has just started for five minutes
    WHEN THE LESSON HAD JUST STARTED FOR FIVE MINUTES

    and people surround you
    AND PEOPLE SURROUNDING YOU

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  3. yaa ... maybe ...

    Thanx for the corrections ...

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  4. YUP... It takes time to adapt..

    kekekekeke..

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